
Give way to a restless churn
Wasted years for a lifeless worm
Left with nothing but a choice
No breathe in my lungs to even voice
That it feels as though I’m all alone
Only me and my fading tombstone
Suffocation was all of their doing
They will pay for these wrongdoings
Except I lay here buried under a sixth foot
They continue to pile on the soot
Only one in this story is suffering
The hope of what should have been hovering
Over my lifeless shell
I am to blame for this isolated hell
Death to the old man, in with the new
“Here lies what remains of him – his hopes and dreams too”
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I’m glad you do 😁
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I’m not the most terrific rhymer and I like your flow 🙂
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The beauty of poetry is that it can be largely subjective with its’ structure. I’ll have to check some of yours out!
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Absolute truth. And you might find a rhyming one out of 600 😂
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Lol that makes the hunt all the more exciting
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I actually know the one. I’m oh so curious if you’ll actually find it 😳
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Time will only tell! 😀
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